Hannah: Honestly, I'm surprised Claire didn't catch on to Cohen sooner. His baddie energy is off the charts! But she's too nice and willing to give people the benefit of the doubt.
Kailey: Without evidence up until that point, I'm with her on just trying to get the heck out of there as soon as possible. But, he knew exactly how to goad her right back in.
Hannah: Yeah, we had to do a ton of edits to his original dialogue on this page, but it was so worth it for the end result!
Kailey: And still more edits to come. Monologuing is way too easy to write when it's only text. If we kept what I wrote, this whole page would just be a block of text, haha. It's a lot of work, but worth it to make the dramatic hits all the better without all the clustered filler.
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Posted February 21st, 2023
Hannah: Honestly, I'm surprised Claire didn't catch on to Cohen sooner. His baddie energy is off the charts! But she's too nice and willing to give people the benefit of the doubt.
Kailey: Without evidence up until that point, I'm with her on just trying to get the heck out of there as soon as possible. But, he knew exactly how to goad her right back in.
Hannah: Yeah, we had to do a ton of edits to his original dialogue on this page, but it was so worth it for the end result!
Kailey: And still more edits to come. Monologuing is way too easy to write when it's only text. If we kept what I wrote, this whole page would just be a block of text, haha. It's a lot of work, but worth it to make the dramatic hits all the better without all the clustered filler.
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