Hannah: The dialogue on this page took a lot of reworking, but it was worth it! Our protagonist's minds are spinning with questions and theories (let's be honest, mostly Atty's), so its a good thing Jack is there to bring them back to the present.
Kailey: Lots of conjecture and worries on Atticus's side, and honestly, very reasonable concerns. I'm excited to get into it more in the future, but for now, they need a snap decision and it's good to see some trust towards Claire, even if he doesn't quite fully agree.
Hannah: Now is the time for action, not thinking! It was fun showing Jack getting impatient with his friend's endless worrying too, haha.
Kailey: I swear, Jack is competing for best facial expression on every page, and he's competing against himself.
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Posted May 13th, 2025
Hannah: The dialogue on this page took a lot of reworking, but it was worth it! Our protagonist's minds are spinning with questions and theories (let's be honest, mostly Atty's), so its a good thing Jack is there to bring them back to the present.
Kailey: Lots of conjecture and worries on Atticus's side, and honestly, very reasonable concerns. I'm excited to get into it more in the future, but for now, they need a snap decision and it's good to see some trust towards Claire, even if he doesn't quite fully agree.
Hannah: Now is the time for action, not thinking! It was fun showing Jack getting impatient with his friend's endless worrying too, haha.
Kailey: I swear, Jack is competing for best facial expression on every page, and he's competing against himself.
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