Kailey: I love all the expressions on this page, so cute! The last one with Claire definitely says to me: 'Well, too bad that you're sick, but I'm totally going to get to drive this!'
Hannah: Claire's always one to focus on the positive, while Atticus is still stuck in his head processing what just happened. On this page I noticed exactly how much he rambles, though I didn't realize it when we wrote the original. laughs nervously
Kailey: We'll find the best way to fit his ramblings and not take over an entire page of the comic in his dialogue alone, ha ha. I think we've done a good job so far.
Hannah: I think so too! Next week will have a lot less talking, I promise. It's hard to have a conversation on a motorcycle. ;)
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Posted September 15th, 2020
Kailey: I love all the expressions on this page, so cute! The last one with Claire definitely says to me: 'Well, too bad that you're sick, but I'm totally going to get to drive this!'
Hannah: Claire's always one to focus on the positive, while Atticus is still stuck in his head processing what just happened. On this page I noticed exactly how much he rambles, though I didn't realize it when we wrote the original. laughs nervously
Kailey: We'll find the best way to fit his ramblings and not take over an entire page of the comic in his dialogue alone, ha ha. I think we've done a good job so far.
Hannah: I think so too! Next week will have a lot less talking, I promise. It's hard to have a conversation on a motorcycle. ;)
Kailey: What about screaming in terror?
Hannah: That doesn't count!
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