Hannah: Here's that part of the flashback that was skipped on page 52! I love how Claire actually talks about it to a person who could help get her answers.
Kailey: Yep. It was smart to save this part instead of reiterating it. I wrote it all as a single scene before, but it was good direction to split things up instead so Garlant can hear the part that matters to him.
Hannah: Maybe I'm slightly biased, but Claire is one of my favorite protagonists ever. She's so determined and smart.
Kailey: I'm too distracted by the tall handsome parrot man to notice right now. (Fangirling intensifies)
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Posted March 2nd, 2021
Hannah: Here's that part of the flashback that was skipped on page 52! I love how Claire actually talks about it to a person who could help get her answers.
Kailey: Yep. It was smart to save this part instead of reiterating it. I wrote it all as a single scene before, but it was good direction to split things up instead so Garlant can hear the part that matters to him.
Hannah: Maybe I'm slightly biased, but Claire is one of my favorite protagonists ever. She's so determined and smart.
Kailey: I'm too distracted by the tall handsome parrot man to notice right now. (Fangirling intensifies)
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